Angel of Death

Hello Merry! Okay, I liked this. Its a relief to read one of those 18th century novels. I'm been busy trying to write mine and I am now officially taking ...

Its me again! I actually liked this chapter and the dream got way more intense in this part. Though, it does seem like it really happened. I mean, she dreamed ...

Hello again! This was a very weird dream and it really kinda built up Carl's feelings and how he treats Isabelle. I like the way you write. You have this ...

Hello there, I'm Angel. I've seen this story for some time on this site, and really never took a look at it till now, sorry. But let me tell you, ...

Hey Bitter! I don't think I've ever read anything of yours, and this really caught my eye. Okay, it seems like you're not doing much else with this, but I ...

Thanks for the heads up! Please tell me that you have another chapter all ready to post. Because if not, please get to writing! I mean, you write so many ...

Hey KJ! Sorry it took me so long to get to this but, I'm glad I finally read it. I have no complaints and this was extremely awesome and entertaining ...

Wow Suze, very sick and yet so beautiful. I like how it goes past limits tastefully. Usually when poets write, they try not to put bad images into the readers ...

Hey Jig! Thanks for the heads up! Again, I have no complaints. Your imagery is beyond entertaining and extremely beautiful. This whole world is so wonderous, and yes, I can ...

Hey Snoink! I just wanted to critique something of yours, because I haven't before. Well there really isn't anything wrong with this. It was beautiful! I could smell the imagery ...

Hey Ash, I'm back! This was a good read. Its as descriptive and fun to read as the first version. There were a couple of things that I saw though: ...

This was really short but it was great chapter nonetheless. From previous comments, it seems to me that you've changed a lot and took out some scenes. Though I wonder ...

Bravo, my friend, Bravo! This was a great end to the story. Though to answer your question, I think the end needs to be a little fixed up. And grape ...

Hey Ky, Alas, I am reading the second to the last chapter, and it is pretty sad that its over but I am so happy for you! Well anyways, I ...

Hey Steam! I just really wanted to read this, just to give you a bump. I didn't finish it because for some reason I can't focus, so I'll read it ...